Simon's Bootcamp

yours ^^

We just gotta expand it more. Let us move on to the weaknesses and strengths of your character! Give me at least one for both of them.

well he is a very good swordsman so this can be his strength
as for weakness hmmm since he is a melee character he suffers from rangd attacks like bows, guns etc.

Hmm... That's good! ^^ How about his strengths and weaknesses when it comes to his behaviour? Can we start with his personality at the same time?

Hmm he can decide very quickly and he is very good at persuading others
as for weakness i guess he can be blinded by rage

Why is he blinded by rage?

he has quite a short temper

Hmm..... Sorry, but we consider that as one of his personality... You better think again!

yeah yeah, short temper as his personality weakness
as a personality strength he is very good at snake tongue(bribing, persuading etc.)

I don't think persuading others is counted as a strength, maybe it (if you make it: he says what's on his mind before thinking if it can hurt one's feelings, causing others to hate him) counted as his weaknesses.

I like the idea, its good ^^

Now another set?

We need strengths right? Well he is very caring, kind hearted and hardworking
but even tho he is caring and stuff he does sometimes say something that can hurt others(like Riven in winx) ofc he doesnt always mean it

Sorry again, but........... We consider that as a personality trait. X(

ohhh......you mean physical strenghts and weaknesses? for these i cant think of any :PP

Here are his accepted strength and weaknesses traits:
>>Strengths<<
1. He's a very good swordsman.
2. ?
3. ?
>>Weaknesses<<
1. He says what's on his mind without thinking if it can hurt one's feelings, causing others to hate him.
2. Since he is melee, he suffers from long-range attacks such as bow, gun, and spear attack.
3. ?

I can't make it on my own, since it's your character we're making. One question, though. Is he a great leader?

he did try to be the leader, but he failed miserably, so no he doesnt have any experience at leading

Then that can be his weakness! The character's weaknesses are finally finished! He only needs three weaknesses and strengths, but we can add more if you want.^^

Let's finish the strengths! Give one trait, please.

yaay ^^
umm well he is very dedicated to work
he practices 24/7 at fighting with sword; learning new techniques
so this could be his strength....dedication ^^

Well, again, personality.........

dang it xD
ohh wait i got one...i hope
you know his father is a merchant right? well he is a very good merchant as well
also he is a very good fixer/tinker
he can fix almost anything

Let's just say that he can fix a lot of things, since saying he can fix almost anything is kind of too much impossible. They work and let's work with his personality!

yeah xD you are right ^^
personality? well as i said before he is dedicated, kind, caring, stubborn, sometimes arrogant(Riven's trait)
i hope this covers it.....im really sorry if im sooo noobish, like i said its my first time making an OC xDD

How about expanding it?

expanding? give me some notes/tips