Trix & Valtor

well this story has winx characters but will also feature some video game characters so that's why i will post it here
Also this is episodic like story ^^ and please no hate, it's my first time doing this


Sometime after Valtor stole the Agador box from the museum, he put all the spells he stole in it. One day he heard about the ultimate spell called Emperor' Might, which resides deep within Blackrock depths.
"Trix!! Come here" said Valtor and put some kind of map on the table
"You wanted to see us master?" Trix replied
" Yes, you see i found this ultimate spell, which will aid us in the destruction of the magic dimension" Trix stared excited into the map and asked Valtor:
"But master, what kind of spell is it?"
Valtor replied: " It is an ancient powerful spell, it is wielded by Emperor Thaurissan, so i suggest you watch your back there"
Trix got a little irritated, but then Icy took a step forward and said:
"Ohh Valtor, i will gladly help you get that spell, if i can have it too"
Valtor smiled with his traditional smile and said: "First we need the spell, but yes you will get some of its power too"
Darcy who wasnt really paying attention asked: " Ummm master, where exactly is this place that holds the spell?"
Valtor pointed the top left corner on the map and said: " It's here, now the tricky way is to get inside but Valtor has taken care of this problem; we will go disguised as Emperor's servants, then when we reach him, you go and fight him while i steal the spell"
Trix raised their thumbs up and said: " Nice plan Valtor, let's do it!"

Cool story so when will the next part be posted?

Thank you since im absent for 5 days, i guess on Saturday :/

Cool story! Great, but I think you should work more on the grammar as well.

oh thanks for all the nice comments ^^ yeah grammar might be a little prob, since its the first time im storytelling

Part 2:

Valtor and the Trix flew to the Blackrock Depths, a dangerous volcano place.
"We're here" said Valtor....."Let me transform you 3 into Emperor's minions, Icy who would you like to be?"
"The best and strongest one" said Icy and smiled
"By the power of Valtor, you Icy are now Patchwerk" said Valtor and transformed Icy into Patchwerk, one of Emperor's deadly minions
"I wanna be someone with crowd control effect abilities" asked Darcy
"Lord Valtor grants your wish, you are now Grobbulus" Valtor replied and Darcy became Grobbulus, another one of Emperor's minions
"I suppose you saved the weakest one for me?" angrily said Stormy
"No, i saved the best one for you, by Valtor's mark you are now Highlord  Omokk, Emperor's right hand man" said Valtor and transformed Stormy into Omokk
" Ok, so we enter the mountain and we first dispatch these minions i transformed you into" Valtor explained
Icy asked: " Ummm Valtor what if we go directly to the Emperor?"
"Bad idea, unless you are capable of defeating dragons of this mountain" said Valtor
As the Trix and Valtor enter the Blackrock Depths, a shadow appears on the rock behind them and voices can be heard saying: "Weeeeeeeeeelcome, please come in"

This story is ULTIMATELY AWESOME lol

Amazing Story. Awesome Work! You should continue this.

thank you for all the compliments

Part 3:

Shadow guy that i mentioned at the end of part 2 now follows Valtor & the Trix and secretly calls reinforcements
"Valtor something isn't right" said Darcy
"Chill, we are nearly there" Valtor replied
Out of nowhere a giant spider appears
"Whaaaat is that??!! gross!" said the Trix all together
"Say hello to Anub'rekhan, one of my finest spider lords" said a shadow figure
"YOU! who are you?" said Valtor angrily
Shadow figure shows itself
"I'm Kel'Thuzad, master of Naxxramas and i serve Emperor Thaurissan"
"Naxx what?" said Stormy
"Naxxramas, we are the group that guards the ultimate spell and you won't pass through us!" Kel'Thuzad replied
"We'll see about that, Icy quick distract him so i can cast a blind spell on Anub'rekhan" said Valtor
"Come on you overgrown spider, give me your best shot" Icy poked Anub'rekhan
Anub'rekhan shoots a spider web and misses
"Missed me you slowpoke, try again if you dare muhahahaha" Icy continued
"By the power of Valtor i give you eternal darkness, tremble before mighty Valtor as you cannot see anymore" said Valtor and put a blind spell on Anub'rekhan
"Damn, you are strong but mark my words......we'll meet again very soon!! Come Anub'rekhan let's go" said Kel'Thuzad and vanished
"Valtor i thought you said we would only have to deal with 3 minions??!!" said the Trix
"There are many dangers lurking inside this mountain, that was just one of them, if you want the spell power come with me.....otherwise go and lose to winx girls again" Valtor replied
"F-fine" the Trix replied and they continued their way to the Emperor
Meanwhile, Kel'Thuzad arrives at Emperor and tells him that he has some "visitors"
"Ahhhh, it's been a long time........so he really wants my ultimate spell? Interesting........ GO Lord Victor Nefarian, make sure these visitors never reach me" orders Emperor

OMG this is getting intense!

Oh wow it just keeps getting ore interesting nice work.

Part 4:

With Lord Victor Nefarian hot on pursuit Emperor orders Kel'Thuzad to summon Baron Rivendare
"Kel don't fail me again, i will heal Anub'rekhan, but you summon Baron Rivendare and his 3 horsemen" orders Emperor to Kel
"On it Sir" Kel replied
"Valtor you hear something?......i think someone is after us" said Icy while spinning around
"It's just a wind, chill" Valtor calmed Icy
*horse riding sounds*
"Hello travelers, we are the 4 horsemen and i Baron Rivendare am the leader" said Baron
"Ohhh look, our friend returned" said Valtor when he saw Kel'Thuzad
"Good luck interlopers, these 4 horsemen will destroy you and they are immune to your magic.....isn't Kel genius?" Kel'Thuzad poked the group
"Genius? heheheheh nothing stops Valtor, Trix listen to me, since you are changed into his minions use their powers" said Valtor
"Riiight, okay say hello to poison cloud" said Darcy and used her power
"Damn you mortals, Baron use your power, destroy them" yelled Kel
"Hahahah Kel you forgot one thing, since his 3 horsemen are dead he is no longer immune to our magic, Valtor curses you with his mark, now you serve me you Baron Rivendare horsey" said Valtor and put his mark on Baron
"Noooo, NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! it cannot be, Emperor will kill me" said Kel and vanished again
"Pheeew, that was close fight" said Trix and collapsed
Lord Victor Nefarian is getting closer and closer to our group, while Kel returns to Emperor
"You failed me! AGAIN!" angrily said Emperor
"Sorry Sir, but these mortals are really tough, they managed to kill all 3 of Baron's horsemen and even took him as their minion" said Kel
"Hmmmm i wouldnt worry about it, Lord Victor has a surprise for them and i think he will reach them sooner or later muhahahaha" laughed Emperor

Oh My Winx, This keeps getting better and better and more interesting. I hope there will be more. Keep up the good work. This is amazing.

Next part

As Valtor and Trix progress further into the mountain, they soon see the 3 minions Valtor transformed Trix into
"Oh look, your look alikes" said Valtor to the Trix
"Yeah but we are better than them" proudly replied Trix
Just as they want to start fighting, Lord Victor Nefarian arrives and destroys them all
"Welcome to the Blackrock Mountain mortals, i am here by the request of Emperor" Lord Victor introduced himself
"So you are that thing Kel told us, hah take this.......*eternal darkness*" said Valtor and put blind spell on Victor
Meanwhile, Kel'Thuzad thinks about awakening Ragnaros, the fire lord
"Hmmm should i do it or not.......Blackrock Mountain is Ragnaros' so i guess i can summon him" Kel'Thuzad thinks
"Hahahaha that the best you got mortals?" Victor taunts Valtor & Trix
"Here take this......*ice spear*" said Icy
"Yeah don't mess with us you Neffy or whatever you are......*mind blast*" said Darcy
"Feel the destructing power of storm.......* storm twister*" said Stormy and severely damaged Victor
Victor seems to be barely standing on his 2 legs
"Alright, alright.......give me a moment" said Victor
"So you finally concede to us?" asked Valtor
"Hahahahahahahha mortals, let the games begin" said Victor as he began transforming
In the mean time Kel'Thuzad summons Ragnaros.....

Wow this story is getting more and more interesting. I can't wait for the nest part if there is one. Great job!

Wow its getting even more intense by the day awesome work Simon!

next part.......expect the unexpected though :D

As Victor began transforming an echoing sound was heard saying "I will have my revenge dragon!"
"Oh so this is your true self huh?" asked Valtor
"Yes! I am dragon Nefarian, master of Blackrock Mountain" said Victor, now a dragon
"Oh boy, first some gross looking guys now this.....Valtor is it really worth getting that spell?" said Darcy
"YES!" said Valtor
Meanwhile Kel'Thuzad is amazed, Ragnaros is awakened and Emperor comes to see him
"Ahh, my creation, we have some uninvited guests, go take care of them" said Emperor to Ragnaros
"As you wish my master" replied Ragnaros and went to take care of business
Back to Valtor & Trix........Nefarian seems to have overpowered them, even Baron Rivendare
"Puny mortals, you can't stop me" said Nefarian
Kel'Thuzad and Emperor just remember then why Ragnaros was created
"Oh no" said Emperor
"What is it?" asked Kel
"I created Ragnaros to destroy Nefarian, these two are mortal enemies" said Emperor
"Damn, we have to stop Ragnaros from reaching these mortals" said Kel with worrying tone
And now the fated battle is about to begin as Ragnaros reached Trix, Valtor and his nemesis Nefarian.......Ragnaros versus Nefarian
"Dragon, i swear by my power i will have my revenge!" said Ragnaros to Nefarian
Valtor & Trix just watch in excitement.......

WOW that was unexpected anyways AMAZING work lol.

Oh wow. That was awesome. This is getting more intense. I can't wait to read more. Great work! Keep up the good work. You are really good at writing stories like this.

Ragnaros and Nefarian start their fated duel, while Valtor & Trix have a secret plan
"Let's leave them to destroy each other, while we progress further" said Valtor
"Ok, let's go then" replied Trix together
Kel'Thuzad and Emperor and on their way to stop Ragnaros and Nefarian but stumble upon grand widow Faerlina
"Ohh look she trains acolytes to worship me" said Kel
"Good, good......let's hurry" said Emperor
Meanwhile Ragnaros vs Nefarian started
"You will perish in flames, die insect!" said Ragnaros and attacked Nefarian
"Nice try" said Nefarian and dodged
in the meantime Valtor & Trix found a rival
"Look! He's trying to get that spell before the great Valtor, wonder who he is" said Valtor, with irritated tune
"Let's follow him" said Stormy
Rival runs, runs and runs.......suddenly he stops before a giant door
"Stupid door, nothing can stop me!" said rival
*boooooom* doors are blasted away and ultimate spell can be seen in the enormous room
"Finally, i have wanted this for sooo long" said rival
Valtor teleports before rival
"Stop right there! Nice to meet you lord Darkar" said Valtor while smiling
"Darkar??!!" said Trix surprised
"Yes, i want this spell for myself, so i can unleash the power of Relix and rule all over underworld" explained Darkar
"Alright, but first fight me" said Valtor
Now 2 epic fights are going down in the mountain, what will happen......

Wow. This is getting intense. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good work. Keep it up.

OMG this is CRAZY and EPIC and idk xD!!!

Next part....sry for posting it that later

As Valtor and Darkar stare at each other, Ragnaros nearly finishes Nefarian, just as Emperor and Kel arrive
"What are you two doing?" said Emperor
"I have to eliminate him from this mountain" replied Ragnaros
"We got bigger problems, there is a fight in spell room, we have to intervene" said Kel
Meanwhile Valtor tries his darkness spell on Darkar but fails
"Hahahaha Valtor you should know better than to try darkness spell on me" said Darkar
"You are not getting this spell" angrily said Valtor and pushed Darkar into hole that was nearby
"TRIX quickly take the spell and go from the mountain" ordered Valtor
"Right master" said Trix
Just as Kel, Emperor, Ragnaros and Nefarian arrive they see spell missing
"IT'S GONE! GOOONE!" screamed Emperor
"After them" said all in one voice
Trix are nearing the exit of then mountain when.....
"Finally, we got this spell hahahah" gloated Icy
"Going somewhere?" asked Emperor
Now Trix are alone against Emperor, while Darkar and Valtor fell somewhere deep.....

Wow. This is getting more intense. I can't wait to read the next part. This is awesome.

winxgirl102 wrote:

Wow. This is getting more intense. I can't wait to read the next part. This is awesome.

I second what she said.^^