Apple Greenfield

Name: Apple Greenfield
Age: 16
Species: Fairy
Home Planet: Hikari
Powers: Light
Gender: Female


Personality: Apple is an honest, loyal & kind soul who loves helping people. Her generosity allows her to win friends quickly & tried her best to be polite to everyone she meets. Though living in a farm is messy, she makes sure she tidies up after herself.

She may be stubborn at times, but that happens often anyways. When someone gets on her nerves, she wouldn't hesitate to be nasty & is a hothead. If she doesn't do work in a few days, she grows lazy. Frankly, she becomes shy & clumsy when she's around boys most of the time. Sleep is very much needed for her, otherwise, she can be the grouchiest Greenfield in the whole family.
Spells:


High leveled spells:

Light Dance: Forms a beam of light in her hands that "dances" around the enemy to confuse them or shock them

Beams of Justice: Claps her hands & mutters a few strange words before making orange beams bathe the enemy in a pool of light that makes them allies with her.

Medium leveled spells:

Magical Laser: Forms laser beams in her hands & shoots that at the enemy.

Super Aura: Conjures up an aura ball to protect herself & others.

Sunbeam: Makes sunlight stream through dark clouds to stun enemies.

Spotlight: Clicks her fingers & shoots bright beams at enemies that knock them down immediately.

Low leveled spells:

Light Illusion: Waves her hands to form illusions.

Aura of Beams: A bright shield of multicolored lights.

Appearance:

Looks:

Spoiler:

Winx:

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Strengths: Apple has arms that were strengthened due to all the farming work, which means that if she punches someone, they woul be hit by a blow of energy that is a double of what others could do. Her bond with the outdoors & nature gives her an excellent knowledge for plants & animals. Her big brother, Peter Greenfield, has thought her how to abstract the powers of light everywhere, so she has an 60% chance of being able to collect power in darkness.

Weaknesses: Because she is a light fairy, her power isn't as strong as it is in the night than morning. She has developed a fear of crowded areas ever since she was kicked in the nose, & gets chills when she has to squeeze in crowds. She gets asthma attacks occasionally when she loses her temper or when she mis frightened, & can only be overcomes when her magic bangle-which can take the shape of anything- turns into a breather scented with apples.

History: On the 16th of September, Apple was born to the Greenfield family, a family of farmers who own a series of farms around the world. Her main home is in Hikari, a planet of light. At the age of 9, Apple was kicked in the nose by a bull when she was running from a stampede. After that incident, her eyesight was never the same: she needed glasses to do her very difficult reading. Apple's family lost their land in their local area, so Apple & her family moved to a small town when she was 14 & built a new farm there. She was rather afraid to make friends at first, but encouragement from her parents led her to be as jolly as she could be now. At the age of 15, Apple's best friend, Beth, died of Scarlet fever & it was a crushing blow to her. But she believed that she was visited by Beth's spirit when she heard a voice say, "Hello Apple. Go out there & see the world. Don't worry about me. It's lovely here, & Im with my grandparents. I'll meet you again someday, just you wait!" It assured her, & though she enjoys life, she is still constantly saddened when she sees the photo of her & Beth. Apple is proud of her heritage, but is ashamed that people shun farm girls like her. Her relation around the world is strong, for she has family members from Eraklyon to Zenith.

Apple hopes to be able to find a good boyfriend or husband who could help her with the farm once it was passed in from Granny Smith to her brother Peter when she dies. She also wants to w able to sell her family's products to the other sides of the universe too, if it was possible.

Hmmmm...... Everything is fine, except for the spells. Can you please give each of them their discriptions?

How about now?

Thank you!!! :Clap: :Microwave:

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Musa_Eyre wrote:

Positive traits: Honest, Loyal, Kind, Generous, Tidy & Polite
Negative traits: Stubborn, Nasty, Hothead, Can be Lazy, Shy, Clumsy & Grouchy.

Strengths: Apple is a strong & courageous young fairy with the ability take matters in her own hands. Her bond with the outdoors & nature gives her an excellent knowledge for plants & animals. She has her firmness set in place, so she could be strict when it was needed.

Weaknesses: Her beastly temper is one thing she hates about herself. She flares up easily & very often, which makes her feel embarrassed after it passes. When she sets her mind to do something, she tends to be stubborn to change it, & she blames others when she realizes her ideas are stupid sometimes. Apple can be nasty & snap at everyone she sees when the "other side" of her takes over. At that state, she doesn't care what she does & doesn't care if she hurt others, but once she realizes what she has done to others, she takes the big step to apologize.

History: On the 16th of September, Apple was born to the Greenfield family, a family of farmers who own a series of farms around the world. Her main home is in Hikari, a planet of light. At the age of 9, Apple was kicked in the nose by a bull when she was running from a stampede. After that incident, her eyesight was never the same: she needed glasses to do her very difficult reading. Apple is proud of her heritage, but is ashamed that people shun farm girls like her. Her relation around the world is strong, for she has family members from Eraklyon to Zenith.

Correction according to text style-

1. Remove these, since these are not included in our new form.
   
2. These are all personality, please remove them then replace it. (Example of strengths: she excels in archery, her power increases by 34% at noon, etc.)
   
3. These are all personality, please remove it. (Example of weaknesses: she is half-blind, that's why she often misses a target. Her power decreases by 34% at night, etc.
   
4. Please expand. What is her goal? What happened to her in her teenage years before going to Alfea?
   
5. Please note that all the category connect together and they cannot held something that oppose the content of the other category. Also, please do not delete my corrections.
   

I hope this doesn't bother you a lot.

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Musa_Eyre wrote:

. . . Her big brother, Peter Greenfield, has thought her how to abstract the powers of light everywhere, so she has an 95% chance of being able to collect power in darkness.

Don't you think this is a lot? Maybe between 40% to 60% is okay.

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Musa_Eyre wrote:

History: On the 16th of September, Apple was born to the Greenfield family, a family of farmers who own a series of farms around the world. Her main home is in Hikari, a planet of light. At the age of 9, Apple was kicked in the nose by a bull when she was running from a stampede. After that incident, her eyesight was never the same: she needed glasses to do her very difficult reading. Apple's family lost their land in their local area, so Apple & her family moved to a small town when she was 14 & built a new farm there. She was rather afraid to make friends at first, but encouragement from her parents led her to be as jolly as she could be now. At the age of 15, Apple's best friend, Beth, died of Scarlet fever & it was a crushing blow to her. But she believed that she was visited by Beth's spirit when she heard a voice say, "Hello Apple. Go out there & see the world. Don't worry about me. It's lovely here, & Im with my grandparents. I'll meet you again someday, just you wait!" It assured her, & though she enjoys life, she is still constantly saddened when she sees the photo of her & Beth. Apple is proud of her heritage, but is ashamed that people shun farm girls like her. Her relation around the world is strong, for she has family members from Eraklyon to Zenith.

How about her goals for her future?

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